Thursday, 14 May 2020

A bad start

this is the video I had watched and I could retell the story as the dog or the boy so I chose the boy here is my story:
I start feeling sad a few coins a day. Through the days and the weeks my jar gets bigger more coins I think I pull down the pitcher from my wall and stare at it a couple of days later I get to this clearing my dog sniffs the ground then goes to chase butterflies I give hi some food he chops it down and we walk off into the distance with my guitar and dog.   

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  1. Anonymous14 May 2020 at 11:45

    Hi ruby, Lotte here, this is a really interesting post, I really like how you describe how you are feeling as the boy, next you might want want to check that all the words are spelt correctly, other than that it was really good.

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