Monday, 20 April 2020

library lion

library lion retelling

One day a lion walked into the library he walked right past the circulation desk and to the stacks.
Mr. Mcbee ran down the hall shouting "Miss Merriweather" Miss Merriweather said, "no running". "But there's a lion in the library," Mr. Mcbee said  "is he breaking any rules," said Miss Merriweather ". No, not really" said Mr.Mcbee "then leave him be," Miss Merriweather said. The lion walked around the whole library sniffing everything then he padded over to the storybook area. Soon it was time for story hour the story hour lady was a bit nervous but she read the book title clearly. The lion stayed for the next 3 stories but the children started to walk away. A girl came up to the lion and said: "story hour is over its time to go ". The lion roared Miss Merriweather came out who is making that noise Miss Merriweather marched over to the lion and said " if you can not be quiet you will have to leave " the little girl tugged on Miss Merriweather's dress and said "if the lion promises to be quiet can he come back for story hour tomorrow" the lion stopped roaring. Miss Merriweather said" yes the lion can stay for story hour tomorrow hooray said "the children". The next day the lion came back "you are early" said Miss Merewether Storytime doesn't start till 3 o clock. The next day the lion was early again soon the lion started doing things without being asked. He let's small children stand on his back so they could reach the books on the high shelves then he curled up and waited for story hour. He made a comfy backrest for the children at story hour.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ruby, The Library Lion sounds like a great story. What made you choose that story. Did you like the story? What do you think would happen after this? What did you like about this story? I like what you wrote here, I bet the pictures were great too. Keep up the good work. Sharron

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  2. this is a great story and i think that you can be an great writer and keep up the great work i love that you put puntuation and use good words at good times.ollie

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