Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School on the West Coast of New Zealand.
Hi Ruby, Ok that was short and sweet, but a very good start. Do you think you could add a bit of detail or a picture to show where you found it and what it looked like? What sort of tree was it in? Keep up the good work.
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this is my character and her description. she is called slug
Hi Ruby, Ok that was short and sweet, but a very good start. Do you think you could add a bit of detail or a picture to show where you found it and what it looked like? What sort of tree was it in? Keep up the good work.
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