Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School on the West Coast of New Zealand.
HI Ruby, nice start to your work here. I'm glad you enjoy gymnastics, it can teach you a lot. Maybe next time add a bit more detail. How long have you been doing gymnastics? What's your favourite part? Keep up the good work. Sharron
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this is my character and her description. she is called slug
HI Ruby, nice start to your work here. I'm glad you enjoy gymnastics, it can teach you a lot. Maybe next time add a bit more detail. How long have you been doing gymnastics? What's your favourite part? Keep up the good work. Sharron
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